B1 Formal Letter
You live beside a school and there have been problems with children causing noise and fighting after school. Write a letter to the headteacher of the school, Mr Brown, explaining the problems you have seen, how it they are affecting people in the local area, and what you think the school should do.
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Problems: shouting, fighting, drinking, graffiti (pasado continuo, presente perfecto)
Affecting people: people are scared, people working at night can’t sleep, people are angry (conectores, cantidad ¿futuro?)
What school should do: have strict punishments, help respect community, watch children more (condicionales, modales, ¿futuro?)
55 Green Street
Green Street School
40 Green Street
11th October 2017
Dear Mr Brown,
Re: Behaviour of students after schoolI am writing to you regarding the problems with children in the street after school.
Students have been shouting and fighting for many weeks. In addition, some pupils have been drinking alcohol and painting graffiti on walls. In the past students were shouting sometimes, but the other problems are new.
Students do not have respect for people in this area. Many people feel bad about these problems, because they feel scared. Furthermore, people with jobs at night cannot sleep during the day. If the problems continue, people will be very angry.
From my perspective the school should do more to stop the problems. If teachers watch students after school, students will be well behaved. Students musthave respect for the neighbours, and they should have to do punishments if the problems continue.
I look forward to hearing from you about this issue,
Your name 🙂 (no olvides – es irrespectuoso)
I am writing to you about regarding – regarding ¡más formal!
I write with respect to… the problems with children in the street after school
It has come to my attention that… there have been problems with children in the street after school
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours sincerely – conoces el nombre de la persona (Mr Brown)
Yours faithfully – no conoces el nombre